I’m going to start publishing TiH on Wednesdays and Sundays, until about chapter 30. It’s a big break point.
KN needs some work.
The reason TiH is working is Kog has a distinct goal to work toward. He’s elliminating everything that connects him to the failed assassination. That lets the character drive the narrative. Elegy doesn’t have that yet, and the pieces to set it up aren’t falling into place.