Musings in Twilight

I gotta rewrite the beginning of TiH. Either Kog goes with the party and returns alone, the story starts much further back, or something happens to change the dynamic. Kog’s violent dismissal from Shang Du is far too quick, and all the threads and angles I built go nowhere.

Likewise, I need to resolve the Osret, Drowning Breath, and Fate agent arcs.

I don’t know what to do.

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